Tonight, I am that guy. Simply, the opening of part three does not read properly. It seems to jump too much between the smugglers and the revenue scenes, a character is both on the beach AND on the boat bringing the goods in at the same time, and other similar issues. I am screaming, here,, not least because this has passed through three redrafts. aaargh.
So, read the scenes through several times, written out all the issues… now to re-plot them, and rewrite…..
and scream a lot.