Plot holes, Jumping and other headf**ks

Tonight, I am that guy.  Simply, the opening of part three does not read properly. It seems to jump too much between the smugglers and the revenue scenes, a character is both on the beach AND on the boat bringing the goods in at the same time, and other similar issues. I am screaming, here,, not least because this has passed through three redrafts. aaargh.

So, read the scenes through several times, written out all the issues… now to re-plot them, and rewrite…..

and scream a lot.

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